Wednesday, May 19, 2010

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Angeethee thandi padi hai
Bahot dinon se kuch paka nahin hai
Joothe bartanon par dhool chipak gayi hai
Darwaza bahot dinon baad khula hai

Padosi khidkiyon se taakne lage hain
Kuch uth kar ghar tak bhee aayein hai
Gali ke bacche gilli chhod idhar daud aayein hain
Is makan mein bhoot rahte hain, aisa suna tha

Khidki ke pat akad gaye hain
Lohe ke chhad abhi bhee tainaat hain
Pair patakti, oonghti hawa kamre mein fail gayi hai
Manjhi see roshni dhumil se farsh par chan rahi hai

Kursi tirchi, toote sirhaane ke saath khadi hai
Ek adhkhuli kitab mez se giri pad rahi hai
Aisa maloom padta hai jaise koi jaldi mein tha
Shayad achanak hee bahar jaane kaa bulaawaa aa gaya tha

Sab kuch thama sa lag raha hai

3 comments:

Ashutosh said...

आप की कविता जिस भाव पे अंत होती है, बच्चन जी की ये कविता ठीक उसी जगह से, उसी ख्याल को आगे ले बढती है -

http://anubhutiyaa.blogspot.com/2008/05/blog-post.html

अच्छा लगा काफी दिन बाद आप के ब्लॉग पे कुछ नया पढ़ के...

- आशुतोष

Anonymous said...

a beautiful bhav-prad piece of creativity...

(angeethi wala portion was best :P)

kapil

pali tripathi said...

thanks guys:)